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Should capital punishment be morally justified and is it an effective crime deterrent?

    トピック: Should capital punishment be morally justified and is it an effective crime deterrent?

     

     

     

    1. 英語のみバージョン (English Only Version)

     

    1.1. For Capital Punishment

    Introduction & Opinion

    The topic today is capital punishment. I believe that capital punishment is necessary for the most serious crimes and is morally justified in certain cases. This is a difficult subject, but we must consider the safety of society and the victims.

     

    Reason 1: Justice for Victims

    First, capital punishment provides justice for the victims and their families.

     

    When a person commits a terrible crime, especially murder, they cause pain that can never be healed. The death penalty is a way to show that society takes the crime seriously.

     

    It is a punishment that is equal to the crime, following the idea of “an eye for an eye.” For example, if a criminal kills many innocent people, a life sentence might not be enough to satisfy the need for justice.

     

    Reason 2: Protecting Society and Deterrence

    Second, capital punishment is important for protecting society. It ensures that the most dangerous criminals can never hurt anyone again.

     

    Even if a criminal is in prison for life, there is always a small risk of escape or of harming prison staff or other inmates. The death penalty completely removes this risk.

     

    Also, it can act as a strong deterrent. The fear of death might stop some people from committing the most terrible crimes, which helps to save innocent lives.

     

    Conclusion

    In conclusion, I support capital punishment because it is a way to achieve justice for victims and to protect the public from the most dangerous criminals. It is a necessary measure for a safe and fair society.

     

     

     

    1.2. Against Capital Punishment

    Introduction & Opinion

    The topic is capital punishment. I believe that capital punishment should be abolished because it is morally wrong and too risky. We must respect the value of every human life, and the government should not have the power to take it away.

     

    Reason 1: Risk of Executing the Innocent

    First, the biggest problem is the risk of executing an innocent person.

     

    The justice system is not perfect, and people can make mistakes. If a person is executed, and later we find out they were innocent, we cannot fix that mistake. This is an irreversible tragedy.

     

    • Example: In many countries, people who were on death row were later proven innocent by new evidence like DNA tests.

     

    Because of this terrible risk, we should not use the death penalty. We must choose a punishment that can be corrected, like life imprisonment.

     

    Reason 2: Not an Effective Deterrent

    Second, capital punishment is not a proven deterrent. Many studies show that countries with the death penalty do not have lower crime rates than countries without it.

     

    Criminals who commit murder often do so in a moment of strong emotion or without thinking clearly about the consequences. In these situations, the fear of execution does not stop them.

     

    Instead of focusing on the death penalty, we should focus on preventing crime by:

    • Improving education
    • Supporting mental health
    • Making the police system better

     

    This is a more effective way to make society safer.

     

    Conclusion

    In conclusion, I believe we must abolish capital punishment because of the risk of killing an innocent person and the fact that it is not an effective deterrent. We should choose a punishment that respects the value of human life.

     

     

     

    1. 注釈付きバージョン (Annotated Version)

     

    2.1. 賛成意見 (For Capital Punishment)

    導入と意見 (Introduction & Opinion)

    The topic today is capital punishment (死刑制度). I believe that capital punishment is necessary (必要な) for the most serious crimes (重大な犯罪) and is morally justified (道徳的に正当化される) in certain cases. This is a difficult subject, but we must consider the safety of society and the victims (被害者).

     

    理由1: 被害者への正義 (Justice for Victims)

    First, capital punishment provides justice (正義) for the victims and their families.

     

    When a person commits a terrible crime, especially murder, they cause pain that can never be healed (癒される). The death penalty is a way to show that society takes the crime seriously.

     

    It is a punishment that is equal to (等しい) the crime, following the idea of “an eye for an eye.” For example, if a criminal kills many innocent (罪のない) people, a life sentence might not be enough to satisfy the need for justice.

     

    理由2: 社会の保護と抑止力 (Protecting Society and Deterrence)

    Second, capital punishment is important for protecting society (社会を守ること). It ensures (保証する) that the most dangerous criminals can never hurt anyone again.

     

    Even if a criminal is in prison for life, there is always a small risk (リスク) of escape (脱獄) or of harming prison staff or other inmates. The death penalty completely removes this risk.

     

    Also, it can act as a strong deterrent (抑止力). The fear of death might stop some people from committing the most terrible crimes, which helps to save innocent lives.

     

    結論 (Conclusion)

    In conclusion, I support capital punishment because it is a way to achieve justice for victims and to protect the public from the most dangerous criminals. It is a necessary measure for a safe and fair society.

     

     

     

    2.2. 反対意見 (Against Capital Punishment)

    導入と意見 (Introduction & Opinion)

    The topic is capital punishment. I believe that capital punishment should be abolished (廃止されるべき) because it is morally wrong and too risky (危険な). We must respect (尊重する) the value of every human life, and the government should not have the power to take it away.

     

    理由1: 冤罪のリスク (Risk of Executing the Innocent)

    First, the biggest problem is the risk of executing an innocent (罪のない) person.

     

    The justice system is not perfect, and people can make mistakes. If a person is executed, and later we find out they were innocent, we cannot fix that mistake. This is an irreversible (取り返しのつかない) tragedy (悲劇).

     

    • 例: In many countries, people who were on death row were later proven (証明された) innocent by new evidence like DNA tests.

     

    Because of this terrible risk, we should not use the death penalty. We must choose a punishment that can be corrected, like life imprisonment.

     

    理由2: 効果的な抑止力ではない (Not an Effective Deterrent)

    Second, capital punishment is not a proven deterrent (証明された抑止力). Many studies show that countries with the death penalty do not have lower crime rates than countries without it.

     

    Criminals who commit murder often do so in a moment of strong emotion or without thinking clearly about the consequences (結果). In these situations, the fear of execution does not stop them.

     

    Instead of focusing on the death penalty, we should focus on preventing crime (犯罪を予防すること) by:

    • Improving (改善すること) education
    • Supporting (支援すること) mental health
    • Making the police system better

     

    This is a more effective way to make society safer.

     

    結論 (Conclusion)

    In conclusion, I believe we must abolish capital punishment because of the risk of killing an innocent person and the fact that it is not an effective deterrent. We should choose a punishment that respects the value of human life.

     

     

     

    注釈リスト (Annotations List)

    英語 (English)

    日本語訳 (Japanese Translation)

    capital punishment

    死刑制度

    morally justified

    道徳的に正当化される

    necessary

    必要な

    serious crimes

    重大な犯罪

    victims

    被害者

    justice

    正義

    healed

    癒される

    equal to

    等しい

    deterrent

    抑止力

    protecting society

    社会を守ること

    ensures

    保証する

    risk

    リスク

    escape

    脱獄

    innocent

    罪のない

    abolished

    廃止されるべき

    risky

    危険な

    respect

    尊重する

    irreversible

    取り返しのつかない

    tragedy

    悲劇

    proven

    証明された

    consequences

    結果

    preventing crime

    犯罪を予防すること

    improving

    改善すること

    supporting

    支援すること

     

     

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